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Post by Selena on Jan 2, 2007 9:09:52 GMT -5
General
Username: Selena Character Name: Selena Larone Character Age: 45 Race of Character: Elven Rider Side[Empire/Varden/Neutral]: Varden
Phisical Description
Clothing: Selena wears a long white flowing dress that has only the fabric on the front and backside of her legs and none on her sides. The dress covers the whole upper body except the arms; it is sleeveless. For shoes she wears low-cut boots. For hunting/getting dirty clothes Selena wears a white long sleeve shirt and brown capris. For shoes it's still the low-cut boots.
General Description: Selena is curvy, with almost white hair even though she is young (in elven terms). She is a little stubborn at times and shows no expressions since she is an elf and she wants to conceal herself. Weapons Carried: Selena carries a razor sharp cutlass that is encrested with jewels and has a sword that she killed a Shade with that is engraved with magical elven symbols the mean 'Fate isn't Always what it Seems'.
Skills and Weaknesses
Preferred Weapon: A sword. Weapon Skills: Everything. Other Skills: Is very flexible. Weaknesses: Fire.
Other: ---
Personality: Selena has an electric personality, she is always determined to win. She never gives up and is sweet, and nice, and she loves winning. Any other details: ---
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Post by Vrael Edoc'sil on Jan 17, 2007 19:18:07 GMT -5
Alright, this could use quite a bit more. Try you very best to describe in detail, and include ecverything. Try to describe her eyes, maybe they have a tropical torquoise color. Or maybe a forest green that changes to lime colored when there is darkness. Also, describe things such as her smile. Perhaps she has dimples, perhaps she has thin lips and a small mouth. Maybe she has somewhat larger lips, but not necessarily large. You can ever go as in depth as some have and describe eyebrows.
This applies for everything. Try to get everything covered. Describe all of her clothing (maybe not in her wardrobe) but her casual wear. Just go more indepth in almost all of the different sections of this Bio. If you need even more specific help with this, let me know.
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