Zalia Aduraka

[Zalia]

Username: Zalia
Character Name: Zalia Isalri
Character Age: Looks about 21, really about 123 ish
Race of Character: Elf, hoping to be a Rider
Side [Empire/Varden/Neutral]: Neutral

Physical Description

Clothing: Zalia normally wears a burnish, leather, form fitting pants tucked into black, knee high leather boots, criss-cross laces. With that, she wears a matching corseted top. Occasionally she wears a black, floor length cape/cloak used for covering, shielding or otherwise concealing herself. For formal events, Zalia wears, nicer dresses such as her favourite, a white one with a simple, square neckline and an empire waist. On off days, or relaxing times she wears looser, clothing such as shorter skirts and simple sleeve less shirts.

General Description: Like most elves, Zalia has olive coloured, unblemished skin and high aristocratic cheekbones. Her eyes, probably her favourite feature, are a bright green like a new bud in a forest. Her eyes are said to get brighter or darker with her moods. Her hair is a sheet of silvery blond hair plunging down to her mid back. Normally her hair is down but in times of battle, Zalia puts it up in a tight bun. Zalia is slender, even by elf standards at 115lb but carries herself tall at 5 feet 5 inches.

Weapons Carried: Zalia carries a long, thin silver sword carried in a silver sheath and an ebony bow she sang herself. Other than those one she carries a secret dagger hidden in a boot.

Skills and Weaknesses

Preferred Weapon: Zalia adores using, sharpening or even just looking at her sword.

Weapon Skills: Zalia is fairly good at swordplay and is a great shot this a bow and arrow

Other Skills: Zalia is extremely adept at magic and tracking

Weaknesses: Zalia is quick to conclusion, quick to anger and quick to mistrust. She sees something and immediately over analyzes the situation. Zalia finds herself passing judgment a lot before she really knows a person.

Other

Personality: Zalia is a creature of extremes, one minute she could be mediating in the forest for hours at a time then the next minute not sleeping for days because she it so busy and hyper active. Depending on her mood she could be you closest friend of your worst enemy. She is a very private person and only truly opens her heart to only a handful of people. Zalia mistrusts people easily and loves the taste of revenge. She is kind though, to the children and animals. She really isn't bothered with killing people if its for the sake of protecting her or her loved ones. Zalia is the type who has the capacity to forgive but never forget…
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[Vrael Edoc'sil]

Alright, you're off to a good start. The only thing that I can see that you need to extend a bit is the weapons section. Just describe your weapons like you would a person. Describe the blade, the pommel, the sheath design, the material, everything. And do this for all your weapons. Other than that I don't really see much more that you can do as of the moment. You could make it longer, but it gives a good basic idea for now. So just the weapons for now. You can always go back and try again.