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Post by Vanyali-Elven Ambassador on Jan 10, 2006 18:37:42 GMT -5
Over his long journey he had had with
Hljodhur Skulblaka, Vanyali has made it to
the gates of the varden."Ai varden abr du shur'tugals gata vanta!"he yells as the blonde elf awaits for the gates to open.out pops a stubby man with a great thick beard"Whadayou wan'?"he asks him with alchohol on his breathe"hey*hic*yourea purty lass there aint ya?.....AK you be a shur'tugal......quickly quickly in this way!"
"Kvetha Fricai."Vanyali greets him.
"Welcome to Farthen dure!"he replys,"This way bring your dragon we must get to a place where you and your dragon can rest before sunset."
"Thank you, may I ask for your name?"He replied.
"Oei, my names Jormundur."He told Vanyali.
"So, tommorrow would you mind taking me to Hrothgar to approve my presence here exists?" Vanyali asked with a half smile on his face.
"I shall do that but for now you must baithe and get some rest tommorrow is a big day and we are hearing reports from our scouts of an army of Galbatorix's men lead by a great leader of the Ra'zac, now my Vinr Alfakyn there is a bath in the lower part of farthen dure and where you and your dragon shall rest is up top where you will have new robes waiting for you, and if you need anything i will be in the library....What colour would you like the robes to be to be?"
"Black."Was Vanyalis answer and he turned to go to the baithing spot where Jormundur had pointed out to him.When he was there he took off his pants and his shirt and layed them next to the bath where Hljodhr
stood speaking to him through mind /You handled your self greatly back the little one, for not many knew what to say straight from there minds/he told Vanyali.
/Yes i know, speaking to him made me feel like a giant and it made me feel more important....Hljodhr, have you ever felt more important than you were brought up to know/Asked Vanyali puzzled.
/No I haven't, you brought me up and you made me feel as though i was the most important thing in the world/replied Hljodhr.
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Post by Vanyali-Elven Ambassador on Jan 10, 2006 18:41:04 GMT -5
In the moring Vanyali awoke from the sound of Hljodhr roaring at an intruder/She's been standing there and I think she's an elf/
/okay i'll talk to her just settle down and try not to breath fire on her/he said as he stuck up his index finger to indicate he'd be out in a second.He went to get his new tunic on that was indeed black but had a very nice red trimming, he took up his blade Skulblaka Brisingr and rapped it around his waist.He touched his middle and first finger to his lips and seeing as she was an elf she did the same and then he said with a bit spice in his voice "Atra esterni ono thelduin"
"Atra du evarinya ono varda"she replys.And finally to complete the ritual he says"un atra mor'ranr lifa unin hjarta onr"
She says with great smile on her face"Hello Argetlam Shur'tugal, my name is Ardule.I am Hrothgars messenger, he told me to tell you that he is ready for you to meet him."she said.
Ardule was beautiful to him with her long blond hair that came down to her waist, she was about 5'2 with a black crown keeping the hair out of her eyes she was wearing a dark purple dress which made her seem more beautiful than ever."Okay tell him i will eat and see him when I'm done."he says with that same spice in his voice."Will do argetlam."
As Vanyali and Hljodhr ate they were exchanging thoughts when Hljodhr said/You like her dont you?/
His reply was/yes i do think she is beautiful but i don't want to see her i have someone back in Ellesmera//that is correct and even now i sense that she is worried about you with other woman, she thinks highly of you and you know if she could she would be here right now/
/I know she is and I care deeply for her but we are not together she merely likes me, i mean she has feeling for me but-He was cut off as someone rushed in the door with dragon armor in hand and it was Jormundur"Vanyali, you must get these on your dragon for Galbatorixes men are but half a mile from here quickly get to your armor they're approaching you will be in the unit at the northern gate i'll be at the one with Hrothgar at the western tunnel and the rest of the men will be at an eastern tunnel!"
/What!!!Galbatorixes men are here already!/spoke hljodhr/where are they?I WILL SHRED THEM INTO PIECES!/\calm down\replied Vanyali toward the sudden rush of anger."jormundur we will meet you there are there anymore riders here?"
It took him a moment to respond then he said with a dissapointed look on his face"No, I am afraid not but we have many elven warrior and archers awaiting at there posts"
"I shall be there"said Vanyali with anger in his voice.He got on Hljodhr and went to where his armor was to find it where he had placed it the night before.As he got it on he saw his dragon spit out a greenish silverish flame into the air as if to tell Galbatorixes men there was a rider here.He quickly put on Hljodhrs armor and they soared to the bottom of Farthen Dur where they would meet up with there unit.
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Post by Vanyali-Elven Ambassador on Jan 10, 2006 18:42:30 GMT -5
They could see Galbatorixes men on the horizon in there dark dark red armor.The first few lines of men had wicked halberds with a large hook and spikes on the inside of it.They could see the Ra'zac leader on his lethrblaka soaring over the men in the sky he carryed many viles of sleithr oil and a scythe in his hands.The men seemed to have an army of about 400 with them
and behind the ones with the halberds they carried iron swords and maple clubs but the ones with clubs were urgals not kull, urgals.As the men approached they came to a stop with a flick of the ra'zacs hand.As Vanyali,dwarves,and elves awaited the Ra'zacs signal for the men to charge the vardens archers were firing ignited arrows."CHARGE!!!!"shouted the ra'zac with a mezmerizing tone and the flick of his hand."MEN HOLD YOUR GROUND LET THEM COME TO US WE HAVE TAKEN OUT MANY OF THERE FRONT LINES WITH OUR ARCHERS BUT WHEN THEY GET CLOSE ENOUGH TO DO DAMAGE WE STRIKE THEM HEAVILY!"shouted Hrothgar from under his helm."Petew"sounded the bow strings as the archers let another line of arrows fly from there hands.About 20 men fell down this time as Galbatorixes men jumped over them swiftly gaining ground.They were too close now as they were about a sixth of a mile from farthen dure.Vanyali took flight as Hljodhr sent great silver green flames toward the enemys barely missing the ra'zacs arm, as Hljodhr sent his flames Vanyali stuck his blade in the middle and Skulblaka Brisingr caught fire.Vanyali saw the men under farthen dure swinging there axes slaughtering many of galbatirxes men, unworryed no that he had seen the varden able to hold up from down there he took flight and stopped and examined his surroundings and told Hljodhr to go lower for him to strike his blade, Hljodhr did as he was told slughtering few of the urgals in the back Vanyali stood on the saddle and jumped to the ground landing on his feet crouched to the ground as blood dripped ogg Skulblaka where he had slain many of the men with a spin of swords.An urgal swung his club at Vanyali and he quickly dodged it and spun at the bottom of the men and urgals feet and as they tripped he shouted "Adurna!"as the water quickly turned to ice and froze many of Galbatorixes men as they fell and shatter on the ground sending shards of ice at the men around them.Vanyali quickly jumped back onto Hljodhr and they set soar as he shouted many of the ancient words like"Brisingr,Adurna,and more words that would destroy the army he thought to Hljodhr/we will win this even if we have to take them out 1 by 1./Hljodhr shot out more fire as he re-ignited his blade and told Hljodhr to go towards the ra'zac, he did as he was told and they had a battle in the air.Vanyali swung his blade as he attempted to strike the ra'zacs head but was quickly perried by the oddly shaped scythe.As the ra'zac caught him offguard he swung his scythe to feel a sharp pain jolt through him for Vanyali had caught the ra'zacs cloak on fire and sliced his ribs open, and with a flurry of attacks the ra'zac was killed.
Although the battle was not over he took a moment to recall how he'd done this and then when he remembered what was going on he dismounted Hljodhr and started to send waves of ice frome frozen bodys all over the place.He saw Hrothgar struggling so he quickly went to his side and aided him in the battle along with Jormundur.They fought quickly and destroyed any enemys that came near the battle was being won as though it was meant to be.He suddenly felt the vibrations of large footsteps coming closer and from the way Hrothgar and Jormundur were acting he could tell they heard it to./Hljodhr quickly somethings coming something larger than you!/Vanyali told Hljodhr. THUD....THUD.......THUD.....THUD.There before them stood something huge about 4 times the size of a kull!Vanyali quickly jumped onto Hljodhr and he breathed fire as Vanyali stuck Skulblaka in the flames.The beast yelped in pain as the fire struck him, while he was distracted they soared up to the creatures head and sliced it open as blood oozed from its eyes.The battle was over.....they had won.
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Post by Vanyali-Elven Ambassador on Jan 10, 2006 18:53:29 GMT -5
comment or vote
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Post by Vanyali-Elven Ambassador on Jan 13, 2006 22:31:28 GMT -5
sorry for my bad spanish  the first means yes good the bottom one means no its bad i mean the pole choices |
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Post by Arlette Halider on Jan 16, 2006 16:23:02 GMT -5
I think this is good!
There's a lot of detail, and there's just the right balance between action and description. Si muee muchos for me!
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the first means yes good the bottom one means no its bad i mean the pole choices